oke here is some bass guitar and drums

[charred loom]

added a little more

[hushed moth]

sounds like a soundtrack from the sims with those strings. You should replace it with something else. Try a classic band setting with drums, bass, guitar and maybe a piano

[charred loom]

hm alr

[charred loom]

with a guitar it sounds real nice

[charred loom]

I tried a different melody

Guitar melody kinda hard to make

[lofty flume]

I feel like the "melody" is doing too much of the rhythm. Try to focus on creating more movement with the melody, maybe even listening to rock/metal songs to see how they generally handle the melody line of a guitar, especially during the solos