its too boring
#be harsh but pointerss
mystic grove
needs more variation
i dont think its need sthe 8 bar section without drums
try makign that part 4 bars long
(1:08)
try not to repeat the melody so much
its kinda anooying and reptitive to me
try doing hi-hat variations
mystic grove
im saying make the part at 1:08 4 bars instead of 8 bars
if u wanna make it 8 bars make the next 4 bars different
next 4 bars of the 8
things should typically change every 4 bars
even if its miniscule
yea
the clap isnt bad
i think you should try a different melody with the glockinspel
instead of it being the chord progression and melody
i would try completely different try layering the chord progression with a different sound and use the glockenspiel as a lead melody
yea thats fine
that glockspiel melody makes me want to shoot myself
this part right here is the chord progression
change the plugin of one of them
im assuming one of them is that glockienspel high pitched sound that terrorizes me
change that sound to an atmosphere sound
and use the glockienspel for a melody
instead of the chord progression
change the bell to another pad
whatever makes that alien like sound
should be replaced
oh
it sounds strange layered with the piano for some reason
try using it as a lead melody
for the hook part
yea
for the intro piano and pad
are u using labs soft piano
oh
yea u dont wanna use soft piano for a trap sounding beat
its good for like lofi and stuff
and when you make the melody try to make enough space for someone to be over the beat
yea
find any sound to layer the piano with that sounds good
rocky sierra
its not a bad layout, the sounds are just kinda goofy, imo
oh u guys r changing the sounds alr
nvm
barren wedge
I think the 808s are a bit boring you should the have like a rythm too instead of being the same note all the time