If I want togive you feedback I'm gonna need a bit more. Music ompositions is a lot about where the song takes you. I think you have a good start, but I really wanna experience the story behind the song, you know?
#Tryna make Horrorcore
tepid pelican
tepid pelican
ah ok. thanks
inner thorn
maybe more bass imo but if theres gonna be a rap over it maybe not
if you want it to sound more horror or like give it that vibe you need more reverb imo
the transitions need more work
apart from that the rest sounds pretty fine, even small stuff like little reverse crashes could do the trick for a rap atleast
make sure you build and release tension at given times btw, at the end you kinda switch from one pattern to the other which i can imagine would sound fine but maybe switch up the arrangement a bit because its a little jank without any good transitions or anything over it
but that is my personal take, live out your creative liberty!