#feedback?

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daring laurel
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hello, recently I made a song, and I would like to ask for feedback, tips, advice, and more.. btw I know the lyrics and voice sucks :/

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the song is bad right?

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tell me how I can make better lyrics and sing/rap better

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:/

daring laurel
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daring laurel
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anyone can give feedback?

cinder jungle
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I don't think the lyrics are in time

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I mean the vocals

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the lyrics are also kind of uhh
you know what it's your creative decision