buoyant barn
Idk what you’re going for but it just overall seems very random. For example there doesn’t seem to be a recognizable melody to latch onto due to its non-repetitive nature and the chord progression doesn’t complement the current voice. I’ll repeat I don’t know what you’re going for, but my opinion is that the synth/sound choice sometimes sounds too bright and cuts through too high which makes it sound unpleasant at times. Your drum beats sound good at the break at 1:14 to 1:28, but after that they’re very repetitive; there’s nothing wrong with that but you should try to use fills to make transitions more clear and highlight the structure of the song better.
high prism
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gilded basin
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