Been experimenting with FL for a couple months. Had a MPC1000 when I was a teenager but never got the hang of it. Now I'm older with free time, its my main hobby since I cant run around writing graffiti anymore since I'm too old lol. Thanks.
#Asking for some feedback
untold burrow
rotund flax
It's actually nice, but has some issues. It's just suggestions which would improve the song.
I hope this helps!
- You should thinking about improving the melody in some parts a bit unless you want it to be something like sad melody
- I'm not actually sure that the main structure of the music is good, the music should start with just the melody and grow up, you can improve this by the next issue(3rd), but let's see.
- Your music starts with the melody and pretty cool here
- Next there's some effects added
- You can add chords of the piano/lead chords or other type of pad instruments to the continuation
- You can add another instruments on the bg
Right, it's about to become more intense with every part, try adding another melodies over there and more melodies on the background. - Improve the melody as i said, add more stuff to it, cuz in most of the parts I see only one thing repeating, it should change even if it's sad music. You can expirement with the background sounds.
- Make automation. You can use chorus and other automation clips used for hip hop. Make it increase in some beats where you add instruments for it to be more intense.
- The last one is buildup and drums. You have a VERY cool beat, but you should try to add some other components like fast HipHop drums and expirement with the sounds, so it will be cooler.
Thanks for reading so far!
Although I'm not a pro in making hip hop, just sharing some knowledge.
I'm glad you're trying to make some music! Continue the work and never give up! Talent is nothing without the hardwork.
If you want to know about something from this, feel free to ask!