This is my first complete beat i'm gonna extend it but i want to get a good base line first.
#First beat need feedback
idle vapor
idle vapor
earnest mesa
I think you should look up music theory videos. Some of the notes are clearly clashing. You should identify those notes and change them to a place where they would fit in the key signature.
idle vapor
Tysm, i've been looking at some videos and it's starting to sound better.
prime hatch
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