Tried a different way of arranging leeme know if it sounds good

[thick terrace]

This is so chaotic and I absolutely love this! This song feels like a fever dream in the best way possible. I kept imagining some type of late-game Super Paper Mario boss fight.

If I were to give feedback, I would so go harder on the beat & extra background instruments!! This is already a bop, and I think it could go even harder!!

Great job man!! I wanna hear more from this if you continue to work on it!

[scarlet crane]

This goes EXTREMELY hard holy