Tears

[main orbit]

You wanna be more mechanical
But refuse to lose sanity.
Tears come saving your
Heart from sinking down.

Down under the burden
Of being who you are,
Crushed from misconceptions of
Your own imperfect heart.

Flowing, Flowing; Here they come.
Washing away the weights some-
Where far into the voids of
Your poor memory.

[hidden bough]

The idea is there, It just needs one consistent metaphor to hold it together. Right now “mechanical,” “burden,” and “flowing tears” are fighting for that role^-^