Hardboiled Heart Collection - 18 Poems by Rocco Valentini

[thorn echo]

For the first one, I loved the way ya used morse code like raindrops, sadly dunno how to decode it ;-;

Minor tidbit is that although it got the tone of a detective, the mystery aspect took a hit in its directness, maybe but what it is in morse code,

Thinks another one is to utilize the environmental storytelling, prob this one for immersion

Have not seen the rest yet, so am ganna dig

After seeing most of ya works it's quite a delightful collection, thanks for the meal

Noticed a lil that narrating is a recurring trait, though can see a lil that ya had a hard time embodying different voices to represent each theme