6.3.26

[main mirage]

I talk but not speak, and rarely talk at that
I eat without chewing, but hesitate to eat
I listen but cannot change, as that requires speaking
I eat not move, and worry for my health
I read without thinking, and rarely ever read
I see but not address, as that requires action
I fear and shake, and do it all the time
I dream but rarely sleep, and sleep and sleep and sleep

[unborn bridge]

I can see what you were going for, and I love the idea. I do believe you could word it better so it doesnt sound lost or unsure. The contrast of intent and action is beautiful. Keep writing, good work. 💜