The Deceived

[left current]

i'm not sure why i wrote this, but i'm honestly really proud of this one.

[nova junco]

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[toxic kraken]

Beautiful writing! ❤️ This one is a bit literal in my opinion, and it feels like there is lots that is left empty. Maybe expand the liar’s intentions of lying or how the lies impact the narrative?
-# I just learned about this in a philosophy class that’s why I’m so passionate about this

[left current]

ohh i can see what you mean

i'll redo this poem soon then

[toxic kraken]

If you don’t mind can i try writing this poem? I kind of want to try this starting sentence.

[left current]

sure! i'd also love it if you could elaborate on what you think this is missing

[toxic kraken]

right now it feels (to me at least) like it’s stating what the question is in different ways then jumping to the conclusion without any reasoning

[sharp nacelle]

Wonderful! @toxic kraken has just progressed to level 7!

[static ether]

damn man you are ultimate

[toxic kraken]

this is my attempt (also my first attempt at this type of style: forgive me if i did something weird)

[toxic kraken]

nah mate i have lots to improve on but thank you

[static ether]

i said that to sorrow😭😭

But you are too ngl

[toxic kraken]

oh my god i am so sorry

i have done this too many times

it’s actually figuratively killing me

[toxic kraken]

i am nowhere as good as sorrow who can write one of these per day

[ripe harbor]

*i am nowhere as

good as sorrow who can write

one of these per day*

- chiserthewise

[toxic kraken]

he is the real ultimate

[static ether]

hey hey dont worry

[north girder]

I would say both are fools.

[left current]

ah igu

[left current]

thank you man

[left current]

this is amazing for a first attempt at the format

great work!!

[left current]

i write multiple daily, but only post a few lol

i end up not liking a lot of them and then rework them multiple times