quasi cypress
Misfits incapable of breathing
Pops out on first read as kinda suboptimal
“Coonhounds” they’re called
Nice detail
The subject of this poem isnt race
The subject is the race of humans
Profound but maybe flirting a bit towards too profound?
The subject of this poem is me.
Feels a bit on the nose.
But I like this! Feels like some leftist poetry. Sometimes flirts with being a bit direct, but I think it works. Good use of profanity too, although I wouldnt be surprised if the mods here dont appreciate it - but it serves its purpose here
humble gate
weak rapids