Long Gone Days

[pliant iron]

REVISED POEM LISTED AS PDF IN COMMENTS<3

Hello, I'm writing this inspired/based on a Song called Long Gone Day which I really enjoy and will link below along with the lyrics. TW: Suicide, Drug Use, Religious Imagery? Ty to the people who encouraged me to write/post more I needed it. God is good 🙂 (The poem is the pdf and the lyrics and song are listed below.)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbVg1486PD4&list=RDdbVg1486PD4&start_radio=1

(Lyrics to the Original Song not Poem) Long Gone Day - Mad Season Lyrics

So much blood, I'm starting to drown
Runs from cold to colder
Time to time the sky's come down
To help me lose my way
Tears and lies for answers
You and open veins
God knows I'm gone
Girl, I just want you to come on down
Lord, it's a storm and I'm heading to fall
These sins are mine and I've done wrong
Oh babe, come on down
All of my past come down, down
Long gone day
Hmm-mmm
Who ever said we wash away with the rain?
See you all from time to time
Isn't it so strange how far away we all are now?
Am I the only one who remembers that summer?
Oh-oh, I remember
Every day, each time the place was saved
The music that we made
The wind has carried all of that away
Long gone day
Hmm-mmm
Who ever said we wash away with the rain?
So many tears, I'm starting to drown
The rain in heaven's all come down
Silver spoons affix the crown
The luckless ones are broken
Fears and lies for answers
You and open flames
God knows I'm gone
And I just want you to come on down, hmm
Lord, it's a storm and I'm heading to fall
These sins are mine and I've done wrong
I want you to
Oh, I just want you to
Come on down
Tonight
Tonight
Tonight
Tonight
I fear again, like then, I've lost my way
And shout to God to bring my sunny day

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Absolute peak poetry. I want to come back to this one

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This…is touching

I gotta hear you recite it sometime soon

[pliant iron]

will add voice note soon

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HELL YEAH
DOM POEM

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HECK YEAH

love me some dom poem in the morn

I can recall how it felt, to run and play
Now I keep, my expressions at bay.
The memories, not curated or twisted
Now the tide recedes, the course has shifted.
I yearn, for the long gone days.

yes we are absolutely yearnmaxxing the long gone days