##266/m (one-line, looking for precise critique)

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proper warren
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i could swim in a lake of white noise by now

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So, I have a whole series of these very minimalistic items. Most important thing, always, is precision or being precise towards ambiguity. I feel like I am not getting the right word choices here. What I am trying to capture is at the moment just the wish to, at least auditorily but perhaps also in other ways, just overload my senses. Just to the point where everything is so "loud" that it begins to be "quiet"