#Forest of Make Believe

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tall charm
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She dissolved at the edges of self

She went offline.

Slipped into the fog.

Shelved her feelings like borrowed books

she meant to return to
Bottle after bottle after bottle

of everything she couldn't carry,

everything unnamed,

tucked into the library.
Anger beside Sadness.

Forgotten somewhere in the forest of make believe.
Waiting

for the day she found her way

back online.

Back to herself.

Back to the shelf.
Slowly she's coming back online

one jar at a time

the library remembers

what she thought she'd left behind.

karmic vale
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Nice! The start risks being a bit self-repeating, but I think the flow of the ending (which feels almost slightly humorous in a dark way) does seal it. If I would do something, it would be to work on line breaks (right now it sort of trickles down but the spacing loses meaning at some point) and maybe the start. I like the picture.

Thanks for sharing!