#Every February 14
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Bro its just an stanza but yes nice
Yes you did
Its a contemporary free verse. Poem is too short for my taste but it is indeed good
Feels like it’s about the pain and payoff of vulnerability
To be fair it doesn’t say how the gaze is received. But that’s how I read it. I like it. I wonder if the first line was meant to include a to, or on, or up to. I bumped on that line, but perhaps I’m just not picking up on it meaning. Cheers
the poem is nice
i like it
but i wonder why im not able to star it