#Every February 14

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undone crane
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Surprisingly very short

bold flower
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Bro its just an stanza but yes nice

undone crane
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Yes you did

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Its a contemporary free verse. Poem is too short for my taste but it is indeed good

high ruin
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I don't understand this poem at all

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nvm, I think I understand now

polar hatch
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Feels like it’s about the pain and payoff of vulnerability

To be fair it doesn’t say how the gaze is received. But that’s how I read it. I like it. I wonder if the first line was meant to include a to, or on, or up to. I bumped on that line, but perhaps I’m just not picking up on it meaning. Cheers

gloomy stag
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the poem is nice
i like it
but i wonder why im not able to star it