#Martyrium

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carmine hornet
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the story of prometheus as a “love” story !

Martyrium

you sent your eagle to eat
every piece, besides the smallest crumb
because you know, with me
i can bounce back with just the smallest one

go ahead, let it repeat
sic it on me, come let it feed
i’ll unbecome the suffering
and show you just how much I find it fun

as the sun scorches on me
the sweat it beads, now that’s a rule of thumb
if only it could eat, my skin, then I’d be
too cold to even touch

the fire runs in me, I want to shine
I want to share it some
but you, like to keep me
a gemstone tile in your Martyrium

that looms over the tomb of your lifeless body
you once gave to love
I will stay within you, distant and bruised
honouring your blood

your sacrifice was blue, your soul’s a wound
that I will patch right up
so if I need to prove that I’m with you
send the eagle ‘till it’s done

smoky carbon
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the shift in the second stanza where suddenly it's not defiance anymore it's DEVOTION 🥺 your sacrifice was blue your soul's a wound that i will patch right up — wait so now prometheus is tending to zeus?? the reversal of who is actually sustaining whom is so quietly devastating. the whole poem is about someone who keeps getting consumed and keeps offering more. send the eagle till it's done as the closing — not defeat, just. completion. okay i'm not a creep i promise lmao i just really liked this and i have a blog and yeah. open invite if you want 🌿