#Without re writing, freestyle

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polar saffron
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one sec

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holy hell

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this poetry is way over my pay grade

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i really dont understand what you mean here however there is great imagrey here not sure how that realtes to the meaning though

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honestly i didnt get anything through my head after the 2nd stanza

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it just might be my problem, maybe someonme whos better can give u insight

weak gull
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I appreciate you for writing on the topic. The context of this one is awesome and the last stanza weaves it all together.

Although, even after being a depth-full topic, the uneven flow makes it seem a bit blocky. Try making it a bit smoother so yk it gets more attention and essence.

Excellent work as always Adam!...