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rare copper Mar 22, 2026, 4:02 PM

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Goodness I hope she is

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You left me questioning the end part of your work

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I love it, reading it gave me the chills

hybrid pollen Mar 22, 2026, 4:04 PM

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Well written piece but the first stanza feels a tad disconnected to the rest of your poem

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Mainly that last line of the first stanza not quite translating into the transition of the second stanza

hybrid pollen Mar 22, 2026, 4:30 PM

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Exactly, the disconnect feels like it swap between 2 different action that don't really flow into one another. (Idk how to better explain, just felt less cohesive than everything else in the poem)

hybrid pollen Mar 22, 2026, 5:02 PM

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Oh for sure hust giving you my thoughts Cozy

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