#Rendezvous
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Rendezvous
This is amazing, if i had to give any feedback it would be that I don't know what you mean in the third stanza with "no thanks to you" (that might be a problem with me though😭 ), other than that, specific punctuation use could help convey how you want it to be read, but idk what to say this is really good, keep going!🤩
ty ❤️