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[brittle marsh]

You look sad today,
I've never seen you like that before.
I want to text you,
but that message just won’t go.

You are the marksman
who shot me with the bow.
And how much I love you,
I will never show.

Your eyes are full of intoxication,
and I always want to be that addiction.
If I started to write about you,
everyone would call it fiction.

How do I even say I hate you
when I truly love you?
But how do I tell my heart
that your heart belongs to someone else?

And yeah…
that's the truth.
@Gau_Rab

[green blaze]

Lovely emotions 😍
Greatly written 👏🏼
I felt every single line, as if the speaker here was me😹
You're words have done the work:Work of a speaker connecting with a reader through word's 💗😻

[upper pendant]

Mate.. That's.. That's damn deep.. I really felt it going through my mind to my heart..
I really loved reading it a lot..
Keep up the amazing work..
Would love to read more of your works

[crystal saffron]

The first 4 lines is what often happens with me too. It's relatable duh and you framed it in a good way!

But what happens with me is we get to talk together again. The truth your heart can't hear is just heartbreaking... I can feel that...

You articulated your emotions in a very nice way loved the poem and expressions!

[brittle marsh]

Thank you guys💙 @crystal saffron @upper pendant @green blaze

[inner herald]

Wonderful piece! loved reading this

[modest violet]

ts hit me so hard

[ancient grail]

Ooh, chills down my spine. It's a bittersweet poem that I can relate to.

[lean forge]

Ooh, chills down my spine.

It's a bittersweet poem that

I can relate to.

- Domino