#passing pieces of love
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I loved the third
all its amazing but this one catch me
You walked past me
I was stood at the fountain
And you stopped to wave
Its something like
The time doenst matter now
Ami loved this vibe
Thats great a lot of my poetry its based on my feelings
Hehehe
@random apex has sent a notification! - @crisp snow @maiden barn @versed drum @glacial kettle @bronze gulch
I have already seen this but I desire to reread
Whisper it again—
let the syllables take wing,
bright birds from your throat.
Do not let the silence win;
recite, and make the dark sing.
A tanka is a traditional Japanese poem made up of 31 syllables arranged in five lines with a 5–7–5–7–7 pattern. The first three lines resemble a haiku, while the final two lines expand on the emotion or image introduced at the beginning. Tankas often focus on nature, love, seasons, or personal reflection, using simple language to express deep feeling in a brief, elegant form.
