February

[hard cargo]

I do like the rhyming. Its neat. But a little bit of improvement is needed in the structure of the poem. Otherwise it is a solid poem

7/10

Great job keep it up

The anatomy

Like a few sentences are a little too big for to rhyme with others

I understand that

But i also like the AABB rhymes

I love those rhymes

But that format of rhymes are better suited for a little smaller line

No. Its fine. A person who pays attention and read will surely get it

There are some people who just skim through poems

You did a great job. But youll improve as you continue writing

Write write and write
And one day youll produce a great poem. Peak one

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