A Not So Possible Future

[tender garnet]

justmeneo is AFK: burning on the outside, drowning on the inside, suffocating in the middle - a day ago

[opal gust]

A slight spelling error in the last line it should be 'believe'

Other than that I love the theme, the metaphors (maybe you could polish them and stay in line with one single kind of metaphors in one poem) the rhyme scheme flows smoothly. Well done

Ahh I must have seen wrong then

No worries it just feels a bit scattered but a good read nevertheless

Ik I was just playing along

Ohh shut up 🙈😋

[prisma moon]

Why is there a reference to Naruto and AOT but it does thematically make sense

Rumbling and sea

Did not watch that so yeah did not catch on lmao

Blend it with one more anime lemme see....

Parasite? No, how about Death Note?

Wait saga of Tanya the Evil and death note goes well together

Tower of God?

Yup triple combo lol

Danganropa High School DXD and Classroom of the Elite

True

[drifting jacinth]

Sup ?

[timid viper]

it is cute

try to not adress too much to the second person

cut some of the "we"

[quaint sparrow]

oh I saw an error with “salty see”
*sea

Oh its alright

I just noticed thats it

Ywyw

I see the anime references

Were you going for that?

Ooouuh

So I got it correct!!!

👀👀

Uhhh

Couple of aot and like

Naruto

Oooohhh

Oh!! I didnt see that heh