The Hermit

[willow drift]

This is such an interesting concept

I like the rhyming too

Protagonist is awesome too

[strong hamlet]

@willow drift thank you friend

[willow drift]

I would say like add some imagery to evoke the senses, or make the external world a little more tangible, it could increase the emotional resonance

:))

[opal yew]

Really like the storyline and how you put in, and the imagery too! Good work!!