"He" | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

inner belfry Jan 22, 2026, 4:01 AM

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@rigid sleet

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@rich gorge

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it's a WIP, not very well written lol

radiant parcel Jan 22, 2026, 4:09 AM

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got me scrolling rhymezone rn

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i like the idea of the second stanza. maybe could improve by picking a diff word to rhyme with define so it's not fine / fine? like something about your design, undermine

inner belfry Jan 22, 2026, 4:47 AM

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ah alright ty!

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i use rhymezone too when i cant think of anything lol

radiant parcel Jan 22, 2026, 5:09 AM

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another thing is the third stanza is about becoming yourself, and although it makes sense, i think starting the last line with hide contradicts that
might flow better if you find a way to rephrase that one

rigid sleet Jan 22, 2026, 5:57 AM

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OOH

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I LIKE IT

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ITS YUMMY

inner belfry Jan 23, 2026, 12:39 AM

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THANK YOU AND HEYYY RUKO!!

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