#The Geometry of a Fractured View

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I.

It is a weathered cylinder of captured shadows,
oxidized tin dulled to the color of old apologies,
its skeletal cardboard ribs soft with age,
collapsed inward like a chest that forgot how to breathe.
The outer skin peels in thin continental plates—
a flaking topography of forgotten hands,
fingerprints pressed and abandoned,
anchored in dust for decades
until even the dust grew tired of remembering it.
When I lift it,
the weight is deliberate.
Not heavy in pounds,
but dense with years—
a burdened geometry resting squarely in the palm,
as if the object itself is asking
to be held carefully,
to be forgiven for surviving this long.

II.

Inside, the archive refuses order.
Loose shards—plastic pretending to be glass,
glass pretending to be precious—
begin their dry, rhythmic clatter,
a nervous ballet of sapphire debris,
ruby-red splinters scraping against one another
with the sound of restrained impatience.
Nothing is simply blue.
There is bruised, electric violet—
the color of a thought struck too hard.
There is stagnant emerald, pale-veined and sour,
as if green had learned the language of illness.
There is a sulfurous amber glow,
thick as a warning light behind fogged lenses.
They tumble through anaerobic silence,
each collision leaving no echo,
only the sensation that something should have sounded louder
if the space were not so sealed,
so starved of air,
so committed to containing itself.

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III.

Then—the wound.
A jagged, lightning-bolt fissure
cleaves the internal mirrors,
a silvery fault line where symmetry betrayed itself.
It is a blade of cold glass,
unapologetic,
cutting the light mid-sentence.
Here, reflection becomes rehearsal—
one image broken into a thousand dim corridors,
each hallway repeating the last with less conviction.
The crack negotiates ruthlessly,
deciding which fragments are allowed to multiply
and which are swallowed outright.
Nothing passes through unaltered.
Every color leaves thinner,
every shape exits divided,
every certainty reduced to a draft.

IV.

I press my eye to the rim—
cold, unyielding, indifferent.
The eye becomes a trembling lantern,
forced to adjust to a fractured geography
where angles refuse to line up
and edges keep slipping their measurements.
I strain for stillness,
for a moment where the view might settle,
but the mirrors lean closer instead,
crowding the pupil with repetition—
each blink rearranging the map,
each breath tightening the space
until seeing feels less like looking
and more like enduring.

V.

Eventually, the pattern collapses.
What remains is an immaculate absence—
not empty, but cleared.
The geometry of protection has shattered,
yet the frame still holds fast,
barely, stubbornly, honestly.
Light leaks too quickly now,
spilling past the edges without permission,
no longer arranged,
no longer waiting to become anything else.

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long acorn
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It's been a while since I posted any of my work, I figured I'd get back into it with the daily prompts. This one took a while to get right. I hope whoever reads this, enjoys it!