#My first poetry hereee!

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tidal flint
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"He"

On my very first day of school
I see a guy trying to look cool
i said to my thoughts
"He must be a fool"

How little did i know
I'll never let that thought grow

He was charming
Wanting to be someone worthy
And from the inside
He was always trying

"He must be a nice guy"
Its the thoughts, they change
Time flies
Year goes

Never thinking that i would be so close
With someone i hated the most

But the universe is a twist
Because now i love you the most

versed rampart
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Love the structure and rhyming, and the clear message I get from this is how weird the Universe is: We're told that first impressions are important to make well, but given enough time and chance, that impression can dramatically change, and we need to take a step back to realise the extent of that change too.