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Doesn't really feel wonky as it creates a connection with "now mad she gets."

It feels like a warning that came true

And since the poem is so short it kind of feels like it lengthened the story itself by adding this

Well that bending feeling kind of matches the vibe in my opinion

Because if my theory of warning that came true is right

When you get warned of something and it ends up happening

It kind of gives that bending feeling too

The rhythm kind of matches this vibe aswell

Especially since theres these breathing elements

To me personally it feels like is a breathing thats getting harder and harder

I could be wrong tho

I understand what you mean, but after all is the author's choice, they know best what message they want to give out with their poem

I didn't try make anything deep, I just expressed what I saw and understood from what I read