Just you and I
When I'm around you I feel like I can really fly
Forever in my heart there's a special place just for you
Looking through my eyes you're the perfect view
I saw your spark when it was getting late
You're my little crow, a little fate
Day by day we see each other's smile
We know it's reason so it lasts for a while
Never told a lie and that's how it's supposed to be
In this world there will always be forever you and me
I'll keep your love till the earth is gone
And love you back not making you feel alone
Please don't leave I will be broken
And do the things that are unspoken
Now I see that the tank has been always full
It was my blood and your perfume
#Half filled tank (begginer)
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Breaking up the lines into separate lines would make it better (more emotional, with a less repetitive rhythm, etc.), but that might just be my opinion. "Please don't leave I will be broken" is a very nice line, but perhaps you could change it into two lines, like "Please don't leave " and "save you want me broken." Overall, I think it's pretty dang good for a beginner 👍 .
In particular I love the lines "Now I see that the tank has been always full
It was my blood and your perfume"
(and it's spelled beginner)