#The silent boy

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hoary fable
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woah!! that gave me shiver, the rawness in your poetry stands out too well....amazing, its one of my fav reads now!!

elder widget
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damn its long

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||thats what she said||

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@hidden dawn

its great man, the best i read today, easy to understand, everything to the point

try adding rhyming scheme to it(just a tip from fellow poet)