#Dull and dark

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rancid fossil
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I love the like simplicity of the wording. I know that sounds bad but I love it since it seems k natural. I really like
‘Only that’s not early enough to keep our sanity in check’
I would say the first few lines maybe work on wording.. using
‘Dark’ is kinda bland imo. But I love it sm
Also the notes by ur name are so cute

left hare
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Aww tyy and thanks sm for the advice I'll work on it:3