Unknown Home

[sick mountain]

I've never had a home
A place to return back
So don't ask me about my home
As I have never known one

Home is a place
Filled with warmth and shine
But those feelings are unknown
As home is something I've never in life won

So when you promise me
A home to live in
Beware I havent been ever home
So that home is my forever

By - Himanshi Mechu

[sterile skiff]

i think you can explain more on what you expect that 'home' would be like with more imagery. expanding on why the reader should "beware" would elevate the poem more