#✨Story of a Star Sailor✨

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runic yew
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*I kiss the shimmer beyond reason,
Chasing it through burns, blisters, fleeting seasons.
I'll drink the sky as if it were azure wine,
For I would have savored forever, its dulcet design.

Some call it madness, some, pompous pride—
This unending hunger, sculpting my stomach in light;
A wolf scurrying, howling in my rib-caged halls.

                        Me? I call it a promise.

A promise, carving my name into mist-veiled hollows,
A promise, sketching my breath on heaven's cold glass,
A promise, bowing to ambition's fire, scarring me holy,
A promise, pressing my palms against syrup-sewn air.

I am the helm. I know the course I must chart.
Beneath the sun or moon , I refuse to stop trying.
I dwell where no one dares to go,
Where mystery reigns, where excitement grows.

For to dream big is to wake feeling small,
To reach for a hand, and find nothing at all.
To cradle each loss as if it were a child,
To wade through doubt’s rivers—still, to smile.

And if the constellations stay just beyond grasp,
I’ll sail until my shadow learns their names.
For wonder is not what I seek—
It is the wind in my sails.*

gentle wadiBOT
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hexed anvil
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Oooh let me read

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This looks like it’s gonna way

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Eat*

runic yew
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✨Story of a Star Sailor✨

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@ornate sigil @leaden needle @gaunt girder

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@stuck vale @lunar wasp

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@grim lotus @hot vault

hexed anvil
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I love it so much
I love wind and star imagery

jovial pawn
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Dulcet desing is a dang fun word
I am stealing that dulcet wordsusngl

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Like claude said
Wondefull imagery

coral geyser
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this is awesome!!

lunar wasp
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Awh man i havent read any metaking poems in a while

runic yew
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@cold grail

runic yew
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@azure kraken, what do you enjoy the most from poems?

runic yew
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@zealous kettle

runic yew
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@sweet ginkgo

silk drift
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beautiful imagery and words. Kudos !!

runic yew
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@inner grotto

noble charm
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I can offer no critique. Sharp imagery. Could perhaps have used some constraints here, like decasyllibic lines or iambic pentamers, but that's personal preference.

It is undoubtable that you've gotten the basics of poetic devices covered in your Free Verse. This is overall a good piece.

fathom tiger
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I love it