#bottled up blood

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upbeat plank
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this is a poem about forced to speak up when a voice has been worn down or taken away, i hope you all enjoy 🙂
(ps, i write all dates like mm/dd/year, just as to when u wrote them)

reach down my throat,
pull each chamber of my heart apart

my throat burns as i swallow the blood,
my ribs crack under pressure of peoples hands

this repeats, over and over again
until all that remains is nothing but a
gaping hole
where my heart used to reside

the blood i used to hold in my heart
is now held everywhere else in my body,
i sit and beg for mercy
as i drown in my own blood.

(11/4/24)

grizzled sphinx
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First of all i am gonna put dates too from now on at my notebook of poems so thanks for the idea.
Secondly i like the metaphors quite a lot, since for me personally a person's voice can be seen as his heart and as this voice talks and talks it get tired maybe even broken like a heart, that's all from me thanks for the poem once again