Fly my friend

[hardy shore]

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[uneven grove]

#🖇・poetry-feedback-help

[broken knot]

Noice bro noice

[sweet loom]

this is beautifully done man

fire poem

[uneven grove]

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[sleek trout]

it sounds good upon recitation despite its minor grammatical flaws here and there

it's a pretty good piece

the last stanza's a little weak, on a second read

maybe rework it?

[uneven grove]

Soka