#Truth on life : lyric couplet (16 lines 4 stanzas)

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quaint sinew
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light in darkness is right
wires around lit fires
soul now resembles coal
awkwardness a sense of darkness

                                                             sorrow making all feel hollow
                                                     wallow in a realm so shallow
                                            bare tears before you tear
                                   selfcare  please be fair

                      pain might drive you sane
            rain doesn't erase a stain
  clear suffering a fear

thinking leads to sinking

 deeper sorrow a keeper
       worry swallows me sorry
                     life feels a non-blunt knife
                            spilling truths source of killing
mortal dew
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I LOVEE the formmm

quaint sinew
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thanks

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@mortal dew

stiff sky
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Why's this in the ask for help? did you need help with it? :/