Bro i recommend using metaphor
#The Crazy World
hybrid zenith
Not use word corruption
Like bird caged
You could use disease or fungus
Welcome
meager glacier
OMG beautiful poem !!!! indeed our world has grown convoluted
could i possibly interest u to read a work i wrote yesterday about this sickly world
i do like it, thank u for covering this
this is a very important topic in my opinion
leaden trailBOT
Wonderful! @shy gust has just progressed to level 4!
cold marten
you should inclyde more metaphors. it feels very generic and like it could apply to anyone. i understand being relatable but you should also personalize it to make it memorable
austere gazelle
i love this poem so much❤great job on it
vernal heronBOT
@austere crag is now following @shy gust.
placid apex