Slizra - Purpose

[sand crane]

Past the horizon, final rays of light
In the sky, stars shined bright but, no longer
Once, we looked up at them struck by wonder
But now as you gaze deep into the night
It is now all black, nothing there in sight
The silence sounds ever so much louder
It draws on and on, further and further
In your life did you do anything right?

Missed opportunities fill your whole mind
Words you should have said more, lost forever
Now you lie there in deep dark and regret
Why do we let ourselves live our life blind
We live our lives like it would end never
Only upon death life's meaning is set

[sand crane]

Slizra - Purpose

[sand crane]

@worn marsh

[brisk viper]

Hey Slizra

[sand crane]

Hey

[brisk viper]

Your poem is absolutely wondeful.

[sand crane]

Thanks man I appreciate it

I made it for a school English test

[brisk viper]

Oh that's real good

Let me know if you need any comments or/and suggestions/help with anything

Keep it up

[sand crane]

Thank you very much, curious what did you take out of the poem?

[pearl jungle]

*Thank you very much,

curious what did you take

out of the poem?*

- slizra

[brisk viper]

It unfolds as a gripping meditation on longing, betrayal, and the descent into emotional chaos.

It begins with a soul craving recognition, spiraling through heartbreak and obsession until it collides with violent desperation.

It’s a devastatingly human portrait of emotional blindness, self-destruction, and the haunting clarity that comes too late. You’ve captured that unravelling with chilling elegance.

[sand crane]

Damn that was pretty in depth
I love your interpretation, the poem was made to be heavily interpretive so I'm glad that checks out
And thank you very much for telling me! I'm glad I did Good

[brisk viper]

You are welcome!

[sand crane]

Slizra - purpose