#A Thought in Jabarano Coffee Dago

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fading zinc
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A THOUGHT IN JABARANO COFFEE DAGO

-# in Indonesian: Mikir Bentar di Jabarano Coffee Dago

Just so you know that I crawl along

If Demeter reaped my arms from my body
Just so you know that I slither along

If Apollo shot me down with his arrows of malady
Just so you know that I keep my spirits alight

But if Aphrodite decreed that I should stop loving you
Just so you know that by then I perish from this world```

-||Muhammad Naufal Afif||, 6-7-2025
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@fresh field

@slim blaze

@inner finch

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@ebon pebble

@weak horizon

@warm cypress

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@dreamy nest

@solemn grove

@grizzled aurora

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@turbid jackal

@gentle helm

@bitter gazelle

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@junior whale

@plain drift

@thorny flicker

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@gritty tulip

@hallow jetty

@livid fjord

livid fjord
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A Thought in Jabarano Coffee Dago
And i honestly think its beautifully crafted. The mythological references make the emotions feel timeless, and i love how you framed resilience through each god until it reaches love. That twist at the end hit hard, in a good way. Its both poetic and deeply human.
Awesome as usual!

ebon pebble
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Sweeet

fading zinc
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@brazen niche

@dusty light