Lucky me, I see ghost!

[ember surge]

Lucky me I see ghosts (v3)

A room full of people that I wish I could see
It’s ghost from the past
They sit and stare at me
However
Only at the midnight hour do they ever speak
I’m sorry to the ones I said that I love
I guess I got to ahead of myself
I Realized I was way too young
And I’m sorry to the one I never got to meet
I promise it wasn’t you it was always me
And that’s something I’ve had to learn from
To the ones I’ve let down
I hear the disappoint from you even when you don’t make a sound
It goes through my head making its rounds
Making my head pound
Thinking to myself I was once I was the name of the town
I can still see those I left behind
Ghost of the past
I wish one day I could hit there line
And we could just talk about what we call the good ol times
forget about the space that’s in between
And instead just make each other feel seen
A room full of people that I once knew
People that once cared
People who become Ghosts too soon
It’s here they haunt inside my room
And it’s deep in my mind there words loom

[finite pecan]

You're talented with rhyme!
this poem comes off like it explores memory, regret, and the silent presence of those we’ve lost touch with.
My faveorite line is: “forget about the space that's in between and instead just make each other feel seen.” definitely an issue rising in recent years– people feeling this sense of loneliness. Follow for follow (on the server) so we can notify each other when we post new poems?

[ember surge]

That’s sounds amazing and thank you for the compliment ❤️

[finite pecan]

You're welcome!

To follow, all you gotta do is /follow [user] in the post own channel. Like this.

Um, i tried to follow you but it said you aren't a valid user? Idk why

[viral crane]

@ember surge is now following @finite pecan.