river reef
I want to be like a bird.
free,
I want gravity to pull me down.
free,
I want everyone to notice the thud that hits the ground. free,
I want everyone to remember me and the pain they cause as they stare at my peaceful body in a casket .
free
I want them to understand
This is not a cry for help . I just want them to see the damage they caused to me...
old magnet
This is really great, just needs some slight reformatting for an easier read and capitalization in some parts. May I attempt to adjust it for you?
river reef
yeah Sure !
old magnet
I want to be like a bird.
free.
I want gravity to pull me down.
free.
I want everyone to notice
the thud that hits the ground.
free.
I want everyone to remember me and the pain they caused—
as they stare at my peaceful body in a casket.
free.
I want them to understand
This is not a cry for help.
I just want them to see
the damage they caused to me...
river reef
Thanks a ton !!!
old magnet
No problem! 😊