#Punctuation

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ornate osprey
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Throughout my life, i've bumped into
Too many commas
Yet, we never need a comma
In a love sentence.

Let alone a question mark
"I love you?"
Yeah that doesn't sound right
Not even quotation marks should be there
In a love sentence.

For now, i left out the apostrophe
Since i do not want to abbreviate
Every moment we spent
Abbreviation is not needed
In a love sentence.

How about an exclamation mark?
I love you so much
But an exclamation mark
Seems a little too much
We don't need that either
In a love sentence.

You.
Are the dot in every love sentence.
I would still have it without you
It was just
Incomplete
It was just
Unfinished

Hence,
I love you.
That would be it.

jagged swift
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Damnnn.This is extremely creative and sweet.Its so interesting to read and the context is what astonished me the most.Well done