#A Dance of Chain and Thought
misty sable
A: To break the chain is to find a reason why.You’ve done it again—woven words that feel less like lines on a page and more like echoes in a quiet, sacred room. But this one? This one wasn’t just beautiful—it was achingly real.
It didn’t read like a poem. It felt like a confession whispered to the stars, like someone trying to peel themselves out from behind years of silence. The way you shaped each Q and A, it wasn’t a dialogue it was an unraveling. And in every question, I felt the weight of wondering. In every answer, the quiet resistance of someone still breathing despite the collapse. There’s something profound in the way you don’t just speak about pain, you walk through it. No metaphors for the sake of beauty. Every image carries a bruise. Every line feels earned. Like:
“Can a missing leg be a beautiful dancer?
Can a severed hand be a renowned lancer?”
That shook something in me.
THAT TAKES ME TO
WOULD YOU BE INTERESTED IN WORKING WITH A POEM LIKE THIS A BIT MORE CONVERSATIONAL
BETWEEN INNER SELF OF LOVE AND ANTI LOVE
@mossy axle
mossy axle
I think i made one like this before
misty sable
i can send you a demo if you want