#atlas

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atlas, the worldbearer
body crushed under the weight of the earth
cursed to struggle, never win but never succumb
over the years his neck hunches, his back curves
his body aches, his muscles tear, ligaments bend, bones break
mind straining for a reason

he calls out to the earth above him, ‘For what have I done?’
in which they respond, ‘It is your duty.’
his mind strains again, ‘And why is it my duty?’
no response comes in return

with immense exertion, he takes the earth off his back, lays it gently in the dirt
Relieved atlast, Yet his neck is still hunched
His spine ever caved to the weight which once was,
His mind still straining for a reason
No atlas for a world without his curse
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idk i dont like the dialogue part but idk how to fix it

forest gust
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nah the pictures

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anyways

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I think you're trying to write about that god?

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I mean you hate the dialogue (although tbh nothing's wrong with it

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idk Ima help you change?

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His voice echoed up to Olympus, yet he received no recall?