Hey there. I like the formatting. You played that well for a more dramatic effect. I like the inconsistency of the spacing as a poetic tool. I never considered utilizing that
teal spear
Hey there. I like the formatting. You played that well for a more dramatic effect. I like the inconsistency of the spacing as a poetic tool. I never considered utilizing that
it's been 1 year 8 months and 29 days
I love the implication that the speaker has counted every single day. That line hit home. The longing is palpable