#Your Mind is a Powerful Thing

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dense oyster
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Your mind is a powerful thing.

You’re more in control than you probably think.

When I say, "it’s all in your head," that’s not meant to seem bad. You see,

your head is yours. It's what waves you unique.

It makes you, you. It's also how you perceive.

Your mind is the thing that processes everything.

Your mind is to blame for what you’re currently feeling.

As well as every feeling you’ve ever felt.

And so, I have good news.

Your circumstances don’t get to choose.

No, that choice belongs to you.

‘Cause your mind is yours, and it's a powerful thing.

indigo otter
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Strong Seuss vibes, but in a good way!
I enjoyed reading this. If I were to make any small edits it would be to try and make the lengthof each line a bit more uniform so the pace is more consistent. Like I would remove "probably" from line 2, and maybe change line 3 to read like "It's all in your head and that's a good thing." Idk why, but I would also edit "Your mind... currently feeling" to "Your mind is the origin for what you feel" or something....
Sorry if you did not want feedback, I saw the comments wanted tag and I am still figuring out how this board operates.

dense oyster
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i get it, the flow is super differeny in the video reading versus the text the probably doesnt make as much sense here

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appreciate your thoughts!

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this is the reading