This time spent with you
opening doors and I left my shoes
issues pour with emotions too
feelings we can’t ignore, snore, or snooze
we can’t go back and I can’t choose
choices unclear & my roof isn’t here;
So even if it rains, I still feel insane
weighing on me, with thoughts uncontained
saying all theses, thoughts on your brain
laying calmly, still in the rain
kissing softly, while i mutter your name
Time is of the essence
our time is coming up
timing not feeling like, it was in our luck
this time still won’t stop me
still wishing I could stop time in a heartbeat
search what to find cause it lost me
you’re still a highlight in my mind,
like a sharpie
a highlight so divine
what would it cost me
if I asked you,
Will You Be Mine?
#Unclear Timing
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I like it a lot! Maybe consider another word other than "mutter" in line 11. Mutter feels dismissive and I'm not sure that's the emotion that you're going for.