100th poem! (first poem where i wrote about smth irl 😭 ) comments would be appreciated lol
#Upstate
plucky horizon
slate nest
This poem seems to breathe with innocence and curiosity. It's easy to fall into, like a warm memory. Excellent structure and a well-composed scene. Kudos to you for this lovely 100th poem. ✨
shut cedar
"as the star dies a quiet death,
as the world basks in its light"
These two lines are very charming.
Your poem is charming in its way, its very real, warmth and an emotional one with hidden vulnerability i would say